こどものせかい || The Children’s World

Shinsouこどものせかい
kodomo no sekai
The Children’s World

Vocals: lily-an
Lyrics: kaztora
Arranged by: kaztora
Album: Shinso Diver (シンソウダイバー) 【Official Site】
Circle: Liz Triangle
Event: C90
Original Theme: U.N. Owen Was Her? [U.N.オーエンは彼女なのか?]

Requested by: Eldrin

英訳だけです。申し訳ありません。

I really like the structure of this song. It builds up a story, and then reveals some new information towards the end that changes how you think about the whole thing.


This miniature garden of toys
Was my world.
It was my treasure,
Something so, so precious that I received long ago.
The light of this splendid land encircled me.
It’s a bit too big for just one person to play in, though…

After growing bored
Of playing with dolls and my rocking horse…
“Let’s play together!”
I feel like that was the first time someone called my name.

Let’s waltz together beneath a rainbow of shining stars.
The music box plays, and when I light the candles on the cake,
Its pale light will extend even into the dark, dark basement.
“Who are you?” I should greet you…

The miniature garden of toys
Was our world.
As long as I was with you,
I wasn’t alone.

I opened my book of scribbles
And you and I were drawn in there
With crooked lines.
We were reserved, yet splendid princesses.

Toys and a rainbow of stars. Let’s all waltz together!
A fanfare sounds for the soldiers’ parade.
Let’s throw all our heavy baggage away and go to the children’s world!
“We’ll be together forever! Don’t disappear…”

I was still so lonely
And I spent my days fearing something.
I had even lost sight
Of what I always wanted.
Come to think of it, I was scared.
I was scared of losing you.
I always, always, always
Stretched my arm out toward you.

The sepia-coloured nursery
Was blanketed with toys.
You laughed by my side.
You must have
Been completely broken…

I’m in a sooty, red room. The whole time, I knew:
You’re me—a mad version of me.
Farewell. Now, it’s time
For me to walk alone.
I’m going to sleep.
I am irreplaceable, precious.
I am so important to me.

A miniature garden of toys—
This small room.
Now, it’s time for me to leave.
I gently locked the door.

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3 thoughts on “こどものせかい || The Children’s World

  1. 空見りんき September 17, 2017 / 8:39 pm

    Hello. Thank you for your translation.

    —-
    > You must have
    > Been broken. Everything else, too…

    I will interpret this part in one sentence.
    I think it is an inversion sentence. I assume the original sentence is 「あなたはきっと何もかも壊れてた」.

    I will translate it to
    “You must have
    been broken, in every sense.”

    —-
    > A miniature garden of toys
    > Lies in this small room.

    I think “A miniature garden of toys” is same to “small room”.
    And I think “small room” is same to “nursery”, which “Was blanketed with toys”.

    Then I will translate simply this part to
    “A miniature garden of toys,
    this small room.”

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  2. Eldrin September 17, 2017 / 11:10 pm

    Thank you for the translation! The lyrics are pretty interesting now that I see it in translated form. I initially thought that since the music sounds cheerful the whole song would be about happy stuff like memories and moments that were enjoyable to Flandre. Didn’t expect it to be about an imaginary friend or probably a split personality. Anyway, the song is really enjoyable to listen thanks to kaztora’s arrangement of the theme! It’s quite rare to hear a happy version of U.N. Owen.

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    • releska September 18, 2017 / 12:24 pm

      You’re welcome! I must admit, I thought the same thing before I listened closely to the lyrics. >_<

      Like

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